#Story - At sunset

in #microfiction6 years ago

At sunset the work is done,
the crow said.
We all have,
what we wanted.
The land will be ours again.
When...
we catch the last ones,
they are hiding in the shed.

So let us do what they cannot do,
work as one tonight,
you know what, how, who.
They are evil and what we do
is justice... right?

Together it is just a piece of cake,
So let's no longer hesitate,
since this is our last will
just feel the thrill.
Off we go!
Let us finish them all
right before sunset
as one, the way I said.

This is a pixabay.com pic of a crow. Above you can read my entry at the #micro-fiction-writing-contest. If you like to join too see @jayna.

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Oh my, this gave me a shiver! It reminds me of the Alfred Hitchcock movie, The Birds. Crows are very smart -- maybe even smart enough to write poetry. Well done, @wakeupkitty.

You did remind it well. As I drove home yesterday my there were so many black birds...they reminded me of The birds so I told my kid about it. I used a bit of that and "Animal farm". Thanks for reading and your comment.

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Very interesting inspiration! :-)

@wakeupkitty, This piece have depth of imagination. Keep writing awesome peices. Stay blessed. 🙂

Thank you for your compliment. I will try to keep writing although it is harder at the moment

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Welcome and wish that you will find the essence of ease to write these kind of thoughtful pieces. Have a blessed time ahead. 🙂

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