Sirenum scopuli
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5 years ago in #microfiction by tristancarax (66)
$2.53
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Wow, nicely done, @tristancarax. I'm so glad you took the challenge to start with a freewrite piece and polish it for the contest! What fun! I love the drama of this piece, and the world-building that went into it. Great twist at the end, too.
Excellent microfiction! Everything you need in a story from captivating beginning to action in the middle to the satisfying ending. Hard to do in 250 words!
Ha! once you get used to 50 word max for a story, 250 is a breeze. 8-)
Thanks for your awesome feedback.
Nice story, @tristancarax. The end has a delicate impact. Loved it ♥
Thanks very much. I'm very happy it has gone over well with people.