When You're Gone | Hundred Words Microfiction

in #microfiction5 years ago (edited)

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Sandra leapt through the air, legs in a near perfect split.

She landed gracefully, not missing a beat of the waltz. One two three, two two three…

Above the unobtrusive whisper of Chopin’s melody, Sandra heard Dave’s footsteps and the wooden boards groaning under his weight.

Sandra pirouetted. Three two three… Distracted, she lost her balance and fell in the corner where the cot once stood.

The door slammed open. “Oh darling! The doc said not to overexert yourself – ”

Dave held Sandra tightly as she began to sob and to caress her stomach.

“Grace… Grace would have been born today...”

Once again, I'm taking part in @jayna's contest. I gladly took her up on her offer to write a #100words microfiction this time instead of the usual fifty words.

This story's a poignant tribute to loss, particularly a loss of an unborn child. In my previous story, it was also about losing a child.

I'm not sure why my recent stories tend to be so tragic and revolve around death and loss. Probably because I am pondering more on the inevitability of death and the inevitability of loss.

Each death is a loss. And each loss is a death.

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Thank you for your story submission, @joeylim. It is indeed tragic. I think we all go through periods of time when we ponder mortality. It’s part of being alive and wondering what it all means. Fiction is a great way to explore those ideas.

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@jayna (: Thank you for hosting this!

Indeed. The pages are the writers' canvas.

A bit like ballet I think, love and loss and life

@wales what makes you say so? (:
Thanks for dropping by!

It reminds me of a ballet

This is so so good. When you can carry a story in just 100 words. Brilliant way ending where the story begins and ends at the same time. 👍😉

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