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RE: Monday Micro-fiction Contest Prompt: Window

in #microfiction6 years ago

You maintain the voyeurism throughout the story which makes us wonder if we should be watching the woman or not. Your description of her is very detailed and you carry the sorrow she is feeling. Great story :)

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