Joyful party! Micro-fiction writing contest.

in #microfiction6 years ago (edited)

In every real man a child is hidden that wants to play. Friedrich Nietzche

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Joyful party

That sunny afternoon the breeze was blowing the trees.

On a swing, a child swings giving joy to the place.

There some young people played hide and seek with the desire to find one of them who remained in a hidden place.

At last, after a while, the friends found him and formed a cacophony that shook the leaves of the park.

Without more, in a space with joy began a party to celebrate the moment.

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Now I participate again in the new challenge of @jayna.

This week's a Micro-fiction writing contest, the word space is the key.

I participate by the invitation of my friend @creatr.

Now I invite my friends @lydon.sipe and @simonjay.

Waiting for your upvotes , comments and resteem.

Best regards

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I read it but for me this story is hard to understand...esp "a party to celebrate the moment".

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Many very short stories require a bit of interpretation. 😊

The economy of words can make it difficult to explain everything completely. If you add English-as-a-second-language to the mix (either on the part of the writer or the reader) it can be even more complicated.

In this case, I consider the fact that both “party” and “moment” can be interpreted multiple ways. For example, a party can be a planned event with decorations, food and cake, or it can be a sudden festive gathering of people that happens spontaneously.

Similarly, a moment can mean just this minute, or it can mean a special time, like a particular afternoon. (When you think of it in a much larger context, such as decades or eons), an afternoon is indeed just a moment.

Does that help, @wakeupkitty?

Yes that helps for sure, still takes thinking and searching for other meanings of the same word, but I assume if I read and join longer it will be easier. Thanks

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I love your joyful energy, @felixgarciap!

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