Well first off this beat is hot. There are zero lyrical problems, and your sylable placement is spot on. the flow is good but misses great by a half aletter grade or so. The problem is that you don't stress some syllables you should instead be stressing. This is a extremely common mistake and the more a person raps the less it happens. My advice is to spend more time just recording things and listening to yourself. Be super critical of everything you do. When I rap a track I do take after take until I'm satisfied. Not saying you weren't satisfied, just telling you my process.
, also keep in mind you can spit six or four bars at a time and punch in for the next take, no one will ever know you did this and it helps because you can scrutinize yourself bar by bar.
I'm not trying to shitpost you. I've been rapping for six years and this is my advice. Here's my shit. http://soundcloud.com/laconicflow
Well first off this beat is hot. There are zero lyrical problems, and your sylable placement is spot on. the flow is good but misses great by a half aletter grade or so. The problem is that you don't stress some syllables you should instead be stressing. This is a extremely common mistake and the more a person raps the less it happens. My advice is to spend more time just recording things and listening to yourself. Be super critical of everything you do. When I rap a track I do take after take until I'm satisfied. Not saying you weren't satisfied, just telling you my process.
, also keep in mind you can spit six or four bars at a time and punch in for the next take, no one will ever know you did this and it helps because you can scrutinize yourself bar by bar.
I'm not trying to shitpost you. I've been rapping for six years and this is my advice. Here's my shit. http://soundcloud.com/laconicflow
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