I've done something similar several times :3 Didn't congratulate my friends until it was late at night - pretending I forgot - then I'd drive to their homes and surprise them just like that :D

There's many mistakes, so I won't go in detail here, but there is potential, so keep at it! With better knowledge of English I am certain you can create something that reads much, much better!

Oh, and, please include #constrainedwriting amongst your tags. Thanks ;D

Thank you for your entry!