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RE: @freewritehouse March Madness Chapter 11 ”Hunger”

in #marchmadness5 years ago

What lovely full characters you have in your stories! This is a world I know nothing about and I appreciate your bringing it to us so lovingly. I especially love that the priest laughed when Grant confessed his "sin" of questioning faith. Nice work! #mmfan

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Thanks a lot! Experimenting with characters and trying to figure out more mechanics of conversations in my writing. I always have trouble identifying who is speaking without writing ”he said” every time. Guess I'm going to have to read more!

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I think you are doing great with that!

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