Redeem it Steemit (original lyrics... inspired by steemit)

in #lyrics8 years ago (edited)


Cast out
Society forbidden to you
Reach out
looking for something new
Free shout
What can we possibly do

Steem
the dream
Steem
the gleem
Steem
the meme

New day
You posted something here
New way
that story you held dear
No Pay
Was it wrong is unclear

Steem
the dream
Steem
the gleem
Steem
the meme

Followed You
You post and try again
Votes Few
Some money flows in
Hope too
Belief in steemit begin

Steem
the dream
Steem
the gleem
Steem
the meme

Long hours
You worked hard on a post
Search scours
You've researched the most
Whale Glowers
Down voted your post a ghost

Steem
the dream
Steem
the gleem
Steem
the seam

What's wrong
You feel doubt enter your mind
Fan throng
Nothing wrong can you find
Wrong song
Whale food is not of that kind

Steem
the dream
Steem
the seam
Steem
the scheme

Whale friend
That is what you need to be
Vote send
Whale Friend we vote for free
Whale offend
Ghosted impoverished you see

Steem
the seam
Steem
the scheme
Steem
the scream

Wake up
Crony friend style post to end
Shake up
Broken voting site to mend
Stakes up
Steem to the stars we'll send

Steem
the dream
Steem
the gleem
Steem
the meme

Redeem it
Steemit

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Fantastic! I loved the rhythm you created with your piece. The words were very on point, definitely covered quite a bit of the feelings steemians experience.

Nothing wrong can you find
Wrong song
Whale food is not of that kind

Lots of great lines to quote, but these are definitely my favorites. Certainly had me chuckling. :D

Just for those that may not know... this is my alt account where I only write poetry inspired things... I attempt to do this even when commenting with the @chaospoet account. So I am saying that I have been open about this and said it many times. @dwinblood and @chaospoet are the same person. That person is me. ;)

EDIT: The lyrics to Slayer's Chemical Warfare were going through my head when I was inspired to write this... :P

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