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in #lyrics8 years ago (edited)

This is about a Guy who desperately misses his Wife/ Woman and wants her to come back to him.
I have not done a Melody for this , but would definitely be a Blues/Rock song,
He is getting really irate about getting her back, if you take the trouble to read this , you will realise this is not possible .

Definitely on the Brink of Madness!

I'm so lonesome ,I'm alone
Why don't you answer your damn 'phone
So very sorry for what I said
Is that the reason I feel dead?

Come to me Baby I wish you would
Come to me Baby I wish you would
Come to me Baby I wish you would
Come to me Baby I wish you would

Now I don't have no real home
I'm empty like a garden Gnome
On my road I've reached a bend
My burst of anger I can't defend

Come to me Baby I wish you would
Come to me Baby I wish you would
Come to me Baby I wish you would
Come to me Baby I wish you could

My cell phone rings I feel fine
Is that you breathing on the line?
No one speaks is anyone there
There's no escaping from my snare

Come to me Baby I wish you could
Come Back Baby I wish you could
Come to me Baby I wish you could
If I hadn't killed you,maybe you would!

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a song lyric with an O'Henry twist - definitely different and depending on the music could be unsettling. I can see this adding depth to an episode of Criminal Minds...but then, I'm still waiting for them to pick up one of my Goodreads quotes LOL!!

Thank you @johnjgeddes, I will look up who O'Henry is? I do enjoy a twist in a story. Did one a while ago called Ken did it, I was told it made people's hair stand up! . Appreciate your comments.

Excellent letter my friend @awgbibb, thanks for sharing

Thank you My Friend, always good to hear from you.

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