Do You?

in #love5 years ago

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The random thoughts that slide into your imaginations,
the pictures you see in your dream,
the future you pictured in your mind,
the plans you drew for your life.
Of the many things that go on in your head,
do I appear in any way?

The names that slip on your tongue,
the music that skids on your lips,
the words you speak and the smiles you show,
the future you profess daily.
Of the many things that come out of your mouth,
am I mentioned in any?

The world you've created within you
and the people you've welcomed into your world,
the structures and foundations you've laid for your cosmos,
and the components you've made of it.
Of all the characters in your world,
Do I surface in any way?

Do you think of me always
or I'm just like other persons to you?
Does my name ring in your ears?
Do you remember our memories
or they are just like other random events to you?
I really wish to know.


Thank you for your time.


My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.

Still me,

>My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.

Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor's order.

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The image is very much in line with what you write in the post, the couple is close but far away, only the bodies are present, but even the thoughts can be other, is what I understand in your work.
A hug

You got the intention behind it. Brilliant.

Excellent poem. Your writing is really awesome. I enjoyed your poem.

Thank you.

If she loves you, you will appear in every way.
If she feel you, you will be mentioned.

This is deep and true.

Everyone wants to know that, what his lover think about him. Everybody wants to observe how much his lover loves him.

Absolutely, we all want to know how special we are.

After all, love teaches people to live anew.

No doubt.

wow nice poem , true Love never dies, both care for each other without no condition

Absolutely. Thanks

The feeling that develops when there is a hint of inferiority in the midst of deep love is exactly what has floated in the middle of your poem.really you r great Writer @olawalium sir.

Thank you 😊😊

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