How?
How?
original poem
To knowing where here is?
From knowing what you hear
To knowing what the ear is?
How long is it from yesterday's
Affirmative for yes to fade?
How long for shade of romance lost
To pale, and shrink, and turn to jade?
How wide the gulf of love forgot,
How soon the ache of death?
How thin the line between two souls,
Between their lungs how great the breadth?
How like the seasons passions turn
And fall upon the spit,
To petrify in amb'ring time
Sublime, and sad, love-knit.
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Written by
@d-pend
12/8/17
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Image sources
.1 --- "Hands" by Meevers-Desu
2 --- "Reaching somewhere" by Walyco
3 --- "Hand reaching" by A-handy-stock
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It resonates in me like the vibration of an Harp... Magic of words, magic of sounds when reading this aloud... Magic of feelings giving wings. I flew with you, thank you.
Beautiful comment, I feel honored that my writing was able to take you places. Thank you so much @tiloupsa!!
Symmetrical energy, away from two souls, and breathe together as one. Explicit impulses synchronize love in the fluid of arithmetic progression. Real change of rhythm in the offer of a new poetry algorithm. Thank you @d-pend for amazing poetry
Wow beautiful poem. I like how the rhymes fall in between the lines. I like to write like that as well!
Excellent!
Fantastic poem, as always, buddy. @jrswab said it — you have talent.
Thank you much @dbooster!
I'm humbled by your appreciation.
It makes me feel even more determined!
Have an awesome day.
Beautiful work, I really like this one about the examined life
Thank you @bitcoinman, sorry I haven't been around much recently, the holiday madness is picking up! Hope you're well :-D
Its all good hope your holidays go great
dont u have any composar familiar? it seems to me this text will be great with music)
it's very nice by itself, but exactly this one plays in the head with definite rthytm
Love the poem! You have a talent sir. I write poetry and post two of them on the weekends. Thanks for raising the bar and I am looking forward to reading more!
:D
J. R.
Hi friend, many thanks for the kind words; I'm grateful my poem had an impact on you! I'll keep a look out for your stuff too, keep writing and enjoying it!
Another great one!
Beautiful poem!
Thanks a lot!
i love logical reasoning poems as your, i had to read over and over before i could grab the code. thumps up to u buddy