Cry Baby

in #life7 years ago (edited)

Baby crying over something
Unknowing to himself, he plays the victim
Awareness in the blink of an eye
Absorbed the first few seconds of a place unkind
And we wonder why it is
The baby cries

This is one of many poems I wrote over 10 years ago and have only recently come back to so thought I would share to see people's feedback as I start to get back into the swing of things. Thanks for reading.

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