As men we often fail to put ourselves in others shoes. Some people can't overcome pain and sorrow by themselves. They need a shoulder to cry on; a sympathetic ear; a hand of friendship and support. Should we be those support structures in their lives then sure we can make a difference.
You've captured so many people's experiences and pain in this poem. It's so filled with truth and emotion that it made me think of the above statement. Good writing. kudos.
Awwww i really am touched and glad you like this. it's actually based on a close relative of mine. wasn't a good time for her. i felt really sad anytime i saw her, you could actually tell she just cried her eyes out. she is getting better now though.
I'm glad to hear that. I hope you are holding her hand throughout.
Definitely, thanks.