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RE: JIHAD | A Journey Towards Nirvana | Episode 3

in #life6 years ago

Beautifully written, @honeychum. Just beautiful. Very evocative and expressive. You have described the brutality and humiliation of rape extremely well. It evokes anger and sorrow. The humiliation and the shame and pain of Zara and her reaching the breaking point shakes the soul. The little boy's confusion, anger and lack of understanding due to age is so real. The evil manipulation of people like Asif is so accurate. I really like the way the episode ends with a twist and carving of a new path. And technically , this episode is flawless. Perfect grammar , spelling and structure. The supporting photo is also so apt....... Awesome, @honeychum :)

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Thanks a lot Nehab. I am happy that you have noticed improvement. I am taking time to do proof reading now. Its friends like you who motivate and inspire to do better work.

My pleasure, @honeychum ... I always look forward to your work... It is a pleasure to travel with you in your journey as a writer. :) . Your efforts and improvement are awesome and amazing :) :)

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