Inamorata a'go

mistakili (69)in #life • 8 years ago

We mixed together like butter icing in a jar of marshmallow and ice cream
You were cold I was hot
I remember our long walks to the woods
Our hands were never apart
It was an unending hour of bliss
An hour felt like fickle minutes
What a feeling

I remember when your cousins came for the Christmas
And said she was in love with me
You cried in the rain
She said she wanted to be with me forever
Then you left in a train

What could I have done, you had your choice
I thought you would pick me
I call your name in my sleep since waking up is not the same
I try to live
I cry and breathe
How could you leave
In a train

You make my heart ache in pain
My arteries and my vein
It hurts to toil in vain
You chose to leave with the tears in your eye
You chose to leave with the throbbing in your chest knowing that you were mine and I yours

I remember when we found our names in the stars
Nights have never felt the same
We drew our faces with each connecting twinkle in the stars
I traced your face with my hands
You had yours in mine

And my face met yours
As you whispered to the ears of my soul
That you loved me
That word has never felt the same
A rush of uncontrollable spiraling of electrons
For a moment I forgot about my existence
I seized to be human or bot
I was vegie much

You had my desire long for you
You had my dreams live for you
No one leaves the way you left
The light in my candle
The wax has been cold for long

I wish you didn't leave in that train
I wish you thought about me
Now you gave me this hurtful past
To think about everytime I'm happy

Now you've taken my heart
So I can't love anymore
Now you've left this scar

Your shadow never left
Neither did that bracelet you gave to me
Nor the love you had for me
I miss you

#bigwaves #steemjet #nigeria

8 years ago in #life by mistakili (69)

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kantos (62) 8 years ago

De este hermoso post debo resaltar las siguientes frases que llamaron mi atención:

Recuerdo cuando encontramos nuestros nombres en las estrellas. Las noches nunca han sido iguales Dibujamos nuestras caras con cada centelleo conectivo en las estrellas. Rastreé tu cara con mis manos Tú tuviste el tuyo en el mío.

Sencillamente este poema expresa muchísimo amor, mucha pasión y una gran entrega hacía una persona que se está marchando, quizás está hablando de un amor, de un amante o de un familiar que ya no estará mas presente en su vida diaria.
Me encanta leer como expresas ese amor sútil, dulce y suave, con pasión pero con mucha ternura.
Me encanta, te felicito.

From this beautiful post I must highlight the following phrases that caught my attention:

I remember when we found our names in the stars. The nights have never been the same We draw our faces with every connective sparkle in the stars. I traced your face with my hands You had yours in mine.

This poem simply expresses a lot of love, a lot of passion and a great dedication towards a person who is leaving, perhaps he is talking about a love, a lover or a relative who will no longer be present in his daily life.
I love to read how you express that subtle, sweet and soft love, with passion but with a lot of tenderness.
I love it. Congratulations. @mistakili

Again...

THANK YOU!