Last Breath (Original Poem)
Take my hand, when I'll be on a deathbed,
I'll kiss it gently, to make it my final memory,
I'll keep it dear and near to my heart,
I've been blessed by such wonder..
Stay by my side,
Let me see you for a while,
A photograph, a beauty captured by an artificial eye,
How I wish, I could be young again to spend another lifetime..
I'm not afraid right now,
Just sad, that I'll go alone,
Crowded by your memories,
And crowned by your love..
I'll tell him about everything, how perfectly he crafted you.
And we'll have a cheers on your name.
May be its not the time, may be I'll have more time, may be not.
Great work! Very well written.
Following you now :)
Glad that you liked it..
Thank you.. :)
Great, really rough and emotional beginning
Indeed. But i think its suits to the person lying on bed and speaking final words.. Glad you liked it. :)
Beautiful poem @ miserableoracle, great work! Following. You can also follow me @delphia16 and visit, my blog as well as I also do poetry.
Thank you.. :)
Also, I'm already following you, and stay updated with your work :)
Nice. An emotional profound story that captures the feelings of those who we truly missed...
Thank you.. ^^
Well done. * Up vote and thumbs up*
Thank you for your kind words :)
hi @miseableoracle, can you teach me how to create a poem like yours?
Play your favorite music, reflect upon your thoughts, write them down, and you'll be writing poems in no time.. :)