My promise

in #life6 years ago

Today, after my day at the Steemit hub uyo, I thought of what to write about.
Then my mom comes to mind, my younger sister as well who sacrificed some of her years for me to finish school first.
Then I thought of my future and my future house.
So I wrote this.
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PROMISE

Let me make you a promise beyond my grave
A promise to make you feel happy and save
A promise to keep and hold you not as my slave
But to make my heart your home and your safe.
Let me make my heart your dwelling place
A place beyond every dreadful phase
With my mind stick to this race
I swear to always run to you without my shoe lace
I will love you and not let you go
I will love you i will let the world know
This path i will tread and follow
In joy, happiness and in sorrow.
I will keep myself from every attempt to stray
I will in every prayer i pray
I will in every word i say
I will do this be it as it may

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@magdnrobinson,

Everyone loves a love poem. Beautiful sentiment. I might have chosen a few words differently though:

A promise to make you feel happy and save

But hey, that's the point of the Challenge, right? Steel sharpens steel.

Thanks for commenting.
I'm not a poet, I just write what my heart tells me to write.
I know its not perfect or professional, it's what my heart speaks at the moment.
And true

steel sharpens steel

I'll try to keep testing my poetic abilities.

I really liked the poem @magdnrobinson, it obviously came from the heart. Great post.

Thanks so much for this.
My heart speaks not my pen ✒.

@magdnrobinson.
You now write poems.
That's awesome
Great one

Let the pen bleed!!

😂 😂.
I write what my heart speaks bro.
I'm no poet though, I guess that's why it looks bit imperfect.

Perfect in its imperfection.

This is a very good poem that can motivate life

Thanks so much dear.
Keep steeming and always visit.
💪

thank you for the support 😁

The heart always finds a way to communicate its emotions and intents
U have a good heart thats why despite not being a poet you could come out with something this beautiful.
Nice one @magdnrobinson

Thanks @adorablechi
I hope this heart never stops speaking ☺
Thanks for visiting, pls do visit more often it gets lonely here.

This is so deep..you really put your feelings into words! Like it so much! It says so much about you!

Thanks so much dear

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