Weekend of suspense (The destination Macabre)

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Hello dear friends of steemit, we have reached another suspense weekend, this time I want to share with you one of the most creepy urban legends in history, if you are superstitious or panic I recommend you not read it.

In a town far from the city, a woman named Dorothy, an excellent mother of three children, lived happily in a coquettish house, existed only for her children, loved them as nothing in the world, only love and understanding had for her children , But more than once he had to reprimand his children for his constant mischief.

Life was not easy for Doroty, like to do without help with three young children, Julian was seven, Mario six and Clara only seven months, nevertheless he did not complain, although nothing was missing to the children, but So it was compensated with the great love he had for them.

A large and happy family, they had no major concerns, if anything Dorothy could complain about was the lack of help from her husband, a prestigious accountant at a company, but kept him busy all day, even when at home, all the time. Time was covered by work, it was impossible to lend a hand to his wife in raising their children, although Doroty only cared for children, but sometimes this work is stressful and exhausting.

One night, like every night, the family went to bed, Clara the youngest girl was crying all night and poor Dorothy could not sleep for a second, she tried to wake her husband up to get some help, But because of her fatigue she did not respond to her calls, shortly before dawn she fell in bed, close to her eyes, heard a loud cry that came from the children's room.

Startled, she ran out of bed and went to the children's room. When she turned on the light, she found Mario, the six-year-old crying very frightened product of a bad dream, nightmares caused the child to pee in bed, This made Doroty very angry.

Apparently in recent times it was common for the child to pee on, this began to happen seven months ago with the arrival of the little sister, to be displaced, this was the way to catch the attention of his mother, Doroty blocked by him Tiredness began to challenge the child, not realizing that in the room Julian was listening to the whole conversation.

You do not feel embarrassed, your little sister does not pee and you big you pee every now and then! As you do it again I will cut the petilin! Doroty said angrily as she changed the sheets from Mario's bed.

Looking at the wall clock he saw that it was six o'clock in the morning, time for Clara's mema and to raise her husband to go to work.

I prepare the baby's bottle, her husband's breakfast, the children woke up and poor Dorothy could not sleep for a second, very tired began the day, had a long day ahead, cooking, washing clothes, caring and Entertain the children, what more could the poor woman do, and to make her tired, unveiled and dead of sleep.

The children played tirelessly, they did not give a respite to poor Doroty, in the middle of the afternoon Mario fell asleep in the living room, it was the only opportunity that Doroty had to bathe Clara, Mario with the arrival of her little sister was behaving very badly, It was impossible to leave him alone, to any mischief to get his mother's attention.

Doroty prepared the bathtub and hurriedly bathed Clara before she woke up Mario, shortly to finish bathing the girl, was heard a screaming scream of Mario that came from the living.

Again, that Mario will be doing now! The mother thought that it was her mischief.

Without stopping to bathe the girl Doroty Scream.

Now what's up Mario? Julian, please give me a hand! Look at your brother, I finish bathing the baby and I go.

Doroty was about to finish bathing clear, when Julian enters the door, Doroty could not believe what he saw his eyes.

Without Doroty being able to say anything, Julian goes to his mother.

Mama, Mario peed in the living room, so I paid attention to him and cut the petilin !, passing the door with bloody hands with his brother's dribble dripping blood.

Doroty let go of the baby in the bathtub and ran to help Mario, Julian who was a very intelligent child saw the fury in his mother's face, ran to hide, while Doroty ran to the living room, cries of pain Of the child was unbearable.

When he reached Mario, he lifted him in his arms and ran to the garage to take the child to the nearest hospital, Mario was losing a lot of blood and was fading, if he did not arrive early in the hospital the child was going to die bled.

Doroty, pressed the button to open the automatic door of the garage, started the car and accelerated with strength, when leaving behind the car stalled as if on a stone, followed by an explosion as when the car treads a ball, The loud noise made Doroty react, remembering that she had left Clara in the bathtub under the car and ran off to the bathroom.

I got to the bathroom but it was late, the girl lost her balance and drowned in the tub, tried to revive her, but seeing that it was impossible ran out with her baby in arm, got to the car and put Clara next to Mario, That I could not stand the loss of blood and died in the car, to see this Doroty went into shock, I could not believe what was happening, I cried disconsolately, under the car, I walk a few steps back, checked with surprise the last macabre work .

Julián, seeing his mother very angry, ran out and hid under the car so that his mother would not beat him, with bad luck that his mother dragged him when I tried to leave the garage.

Doroty stared in disbelief at the sea of ​​blood flowing from her child, wounded by her own car, her mother collapsed to the floor crying uncomfortably, in a few minutes death took to what she loved most.

He took his children in his arms, brought them back to his house, crying and shouting nonsense, in the blink of an eye they snatched the lives of their little ones, the cries of wailing and despair were heard from afar.

At nightfall, the husband returned to his house, his attention was drawn to the darkness and the silence that reigned in his home, not to wake the family, went to his room in the dark and quietly, when opening the doors Of his bedroom turned on the light and his wife was not, thinking that he would be in the boys' dormitory headed for him, turned on the light and there was no one there.

He turned on the lights in the hallway and started screaming

Doroty, where are you? Why are the lights off?

The naive husband thought it was a game, in the dark began to walk the house, looking for the family, he thought they played hide and seek, ignoring the macabre fate.

I looked in the dining room, then in the living room and finally went to the last place of the house, the bathroom, turning on the light, found all his family dead in the tub.

Doroty could not bear the pain and took her life by cutting off her veins.


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I'll wait for you tomorrow to enjoy another story of my land Corrientes.

José Luis Fernández
Corrientes Argentina


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Superb story @jlufer! I reconize the last gif . is from the movie 13 ghost that was made in 2001. I watched it with my friends many times.

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Is a very interesting story.
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Very sad story

This is an urban legend, well known and I even think that he got to make movies with history.
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