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RE: Vetsconnect, My Story- Vol 1. -Why I Joined
It's a chatting type website, a lot of people on steemit use it.
This is a good story (true stories are the best stories) but I would like to assist you with formatting for readability. I think a lot of people would enjoy reading this, but some may just look at the block of text and click away.
If you sign up on discord, my name is @ironshield#9323, look me up. www.discord.com
I did a little research on discord, i see it has like 80m users , so they must be doing something right. Ill check it out and try it. I appreciate any and all criticisms and critiques. I usually do add pictures and spice up my posts, this one was on a whim though, i started typing and didn't stop to think about anything, its all freestyle from my memories of life. In essence it is a rough draft. I felt i had to just get it out though. I plan on editing it tonight after work. Ill sign up on discord and get with you this week though, thanks for the heads up and offer to help clean it up, there is going to be a few more volumes too. Probably 4 or 5 more so i will take all the help i can get. I love to write and i think im pretty good but i know it could be a lot better. God Bless Ironshield, thanks