Twisted karma
descended on the vase
That ashtray that lay close
was encircled by cigarettes
The night became all the more quiet
Each cigarette
to light the ashtray
smouldered and sizzled
Morning arrived
fresh flowers in the vase
and the night pushed around
on footpaths
The crowd became dense
around the buts
The night that had descended on the vase
retreated
The crowd of buts go crazy again.
Very poignant poem, @honeychum . You have written beautifully. "The night that had descended on the case, retreated" - beautiful line ! 😊
Thanks buddy. I am just trying. Glad that u liked it. :)
My pleasure , @honeychum :-)
Beautifully written.
Thanks mate. :)
Lovely poem, but what does meanz 'Karma' ?
Karma is everything. I am posting on steem that is karma, I am talking to u, that is karma. Life is all about Karma and that is the basic principle of Hinduism. Karma and Dharma our life consists of these two words. Whatever you will get in life is based on Karma's only. Karma is the "deed"
Alright, also mean is 'Budh Mat Ka Aqeedah' ?
I think you got it :)
Karma ( work ) Is what decides our future in this life. Good karma and bad karma. We will reap, what we have sowed.
Boya beej babul ka to aam kaha se hoi. That is Karma
Seriously, Karma somewhere must be laughing reading your lovely comments peeps! @honeychum @akashhassan @sanach
:) you join the party brother @pkalra
yap:p thanks to bollywood!
no no karma means kam jo kam karty ho na usko kehty achy karm achy kam bury karm bury kam got it!
In Indonesian language "karma" means : bad actions that will cause bad implication for the actors in the future.
Ohh ,, i did not know about that. But here its used in Hindi :)
I know mera dost @honeychum... cause I understand hindi a little since my grandpa is originally from India.
That's good brother.
Beautiful poetry....
Thanks @barbie.doll
Deep meaning
Thanks @information7
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