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RE: Freedom of Expression

in #life7 years ago

Hey Naina, nice article it is. I would like to give you some suggestions if you feel like accepting those, it would be great. You know a lot of stuff. But when you present it in an article you don't have to directly tell it to others. You have to give them a chance to think, and not just accept whatever you tell them. Instead of naming it "freedom of expression" you should name it something which grabs attention, is related to people's life, connect them, make them wonder and curious about what you wanna actually say. Also, talking about chakras in a para and finishing it there only was abrupt. Make a different post for that if you want to tell it to people. You told a lot in such a short article. what you can do is break it into many articles and think and write more to clear one thing, ask it in your article, then answer it.Raise questions and let people run their brains and analyse. Hope it helps. Keep it up. Good luck :)

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Thanx my dear, that was a very good open feedback and for sure i take it as an advice :)

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