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RE: 1947 - A LOVE STORY | Episode 5
Hi @honeychum this is a nice story
But I think you're making it
Too boring to the eyes
Humans are a bit lazy
I have a similar story
You could check it out to see some way to make it look
Better.
I mean no disrespect
Am still new here too
But still the story is too long
Try making it shorter
I think you can cut them into
Parts and use more paragraphs
This is just an opinion and I stand to be corrected
In anyway am wrong
Thanks have a nice day
I respect your opinion buddy. This is a story which I wrote last year. I try to keep it interesting by adding relevant images but I only use them when they are required. This story was written as a Novel but i am already editing the scenes to make it short.
I do not think that 6 episode story can be considered long. I respect your opinion though that I should make it more appealing visually.
Thanks for your feedback and I will try to improve in the concerned field.
Thanks first of all for replying
And then for seeing it as an honest opinion
Well am sorry for the difficulties
I understand
I have a similar problem too
I just manage somehow
I hope you can too