Your Burden Now

in #kudospoetry6 years ago (edited)

This is my entry to the Kudos Poetry Competition sponsored by @damianjayclay and @nikisteem.

This poem comes from several phone calls from just last night. Which brings to mind an eternal question: How many times are we to we help our brother?

As many times as it takes, until we truly cannot continue.

At some point, your brother must shoulder his own weight and whether crawling or stumbling, carry it forward.

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Your Burden Now

Puppy dog eyes bleed
through the phone.
The promise, the threat
of suicide

again.

Did you forget you’ve said
these worn drunken words?
...if only someone cared…

This time.

My heart wears scars
won enduring years of your battles.
Take my hand.
Note my resolve.

Your burden now is proof.



Image by @elianasgarden with permissions

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Oh Jon!
Hugs

Are you kidding me? Spam comments and vote begging like this won't get you anything but flags. If you want to interact, try reading the damn post and commenting with something intelligent.

Poem is beautiful but sorry you are still struggling with this. hugs

Thank you...

A very touching and heartfelt poem @jonknight

I struggle with my brothers mental issues as well so this one hit close to home.

Thank you. Good luck...

Wow, what a good post. Will definitely resteem it! Thank you for sharing.

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