Lukewarm
So, here's a little poem that I wrote and I hope it conveys my meaning.
Lukewarm
Lukewarm.
Transient perception.
Fuck the world,
this was not my intention...
it is but a tragic collection
of memories unfurled.
Fading dissention
lukewarm.
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Thanks!
It is an honor to have you read your poem.
I truly appreciate the feedback. Thanks!
good poem @ dbzfan4awhile
how many days after next poem we get ?
Probably a few days. Be patient and I will try to do my best.
love to read it...........
A writer isn't much without people to read his/her work.
this is so great. you got the great point here
Thank you!
amazing poem....you are getting to be a great poet
Thank you very much. I don't feel that I'm a great poet, but I am better than average.
i like that, thanks.
You're quite welcome, I think it turned out alright.
yeah, that' great..
Thank you!