Kill the pad challenge week #3 | SPONSORED BY SMA | FREEDOM | Dookiebrownflow of Second Womb
Artwork by @Scuzzy
I've been watching this challenge from a bird eye view the past two weeks, much respect to everyone who contributes to this initiative. I must say @jamesgetsit this is impressive, appreciate your dedication to the craft son, stay at it! big ups to @simgirl for the topic of choice.
free·dom
ˈfrēdəm/
noun
noun: freedom
the power or right to act, speak, or think as one wants without hindrance or restraint.
"we do have some freedom of choice"
absence of subjection to foreign domination or despotic government.
"he was a champion of Irish freedom"
The true question is "ARE YOU FREE"
FREEDOM
(Lyrics)
Free as a flying fish in a field of fairies with Angel tips
Feeding frenzy on pheromones
benevolent ancient artifacts
liberating in states debating
whether I'm tainted
in future tense when I made it
This present moment elated
elevated
Let's celebrate
here to toast out freedom
Dumb to believe that we're free ummmm
Who's controlling the puppets
It must've been uncle rukus
Supremacy is the tendency
Rectifying a mini me
Millions of minions mimicking
Rest in peace
Rest in peace
To the souls stole by the hands of the enemies
sure to lend me the synergy
simply i will devour
reconditioning power
People posses it is ours who seem obsessed
with giving it to the next
Or anyone with a check
Or everyone who's elected as cultural syndicates
Conspiracies leave a tint
to timid in our attempt
To learn what's truth and append
emancipation my friends
Invasions across the nation
the question on this occasion
Is where is your spirit stationed
agent for the encagement
Or aiding in the inflation
Expanding another brother
Or damaging one another
hand this one to the mother's and sisters
So that our sons with insist on freeing themselves
From the menace which is in them
Do you think you are free Or
Are you locked while the key sits right below your feet where your crown seems to be
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Wuutttttt... So dope dude. Honestly, I don't really have any constructive criticism. I would say I'd like to see more of a solid bar structure, but didn't even need that with this, it just rolled on. A lot of people that write in this structure, sometimes the read can get lost when reading, especially as a rap, but that didn't happen for a second... It just rolled on. Fucking love it dude.
Appreciate you participating!
Heyyyy thanks man.. Funny you say that. Ive never learned how to count bars correctly.. Let alome write them haha.. My cousins use to always tease me.. Because my 16s was 32's to them lls...i scribe it the way i flow it tho... Glad it resonates with you man
last lines are killer - the whole thing is dope !
thank you much love.... didn't know how it would be received but I'm at static you like!!
you're very welcome! important topic - great lyrics
But I could quote every line to be honest, lol
aww mann.. got me over here cheesing!! thank you !!
Nice closer
THANK YOU SIR