Ayeee this was cool dude. I think it was a bit too poetic for this competition though. You even said it:

I've ever done one of these poetry challenges

This is a rap lyrics challenge... While some might say "Well, then that's just poetry", not exactly. Rap lyrics are always poetry, but we both know that poetry aren't always rap lyrics.

Next time just come ready to rip it with some rap lyrics my dude, I know you got the skill!