This was great. It was much easier to understand; maybe I am getting used to this. I love the layout and the consistent imagery though.
The waters and the sand, the sun and the fire, and then the sands turn to ashes. There is a lot of meaning behind each image which I get, even though I may find it difficult to connect them all together. Your poetry is inspirational and remarkable :D
Well said, and you echoed a lot of my comments, but so much more succinctly. In counterpoint I found the layout distracting; that is just personal preference though.
I agree with the strong images and infused meanings.