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RE: The Pond - Entry for Supernatural Writing contest by Jerry Banfield

in #jerrybanfield • 7 years ago

Great story. You beautifully describe things. It felt like I was there. One suggestion I have though is to try and club sentences into bigger paragraphs. It just reads easier in my opinion. Keep it up!

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