@jerrybanfield's Supernatural Writing Contest SWC | Returning to life

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"Supernatural" lived experiences that mark for life, perhaps many times we hear or read about this type of events and we think no, it is not possible, but the reality is different and until not the you live you do not believe.

What we sometimes think is fun can result in something really shocking and catastrophic, approaching death or simply driving you to it.

A real story that left many affected, in the blink of an eye, life is over.

Car racing is usually fun in: (mud racing), but when you risk your life under the influence of alcohol, you think it's very fun to compete, have the most adrenaline, not knowing what can happen, hurt you and / or those around.

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Having a car is great if you use it with caution

A game can end badly: seven (07) young people attended a party in the town where I grew up, to the festivities, everyone goes out to have fun and most go in their cars to take others and share in groups, but when they consume a lot alcohol, the idea is lost and things go wrong. Some friends decided after the party, it would be fun, a car race at 3 in the morning. Some did not think it was a good idea, because they had to go home, so their mothers did not realize they were competing, and they could be scolded, but as always, there are friends who insist, even for something bad, until accept. There were three cars, everyone laughed and thought it would be fantastic and suddenly happened what they had never imagined, a triple accident, the alcohol made them lose their notion and collided with each other circling at the speed they were going.

Some young people flew out of the cars and others were unconscious and suddenly one of the cars started to burn in flames, in that car there was a young woman and her boyfriend, he managed to leave, but she was trapped. "It seems that her legs were stuck", the boyfriend tried to get him out and shouted for help to his friends, but they were all unconscious, the woman screamed and shouted help, get me out of here and the boyfriend could not, due to his stay in the car, She died burned and he desperately called his friends to react, but it was useless.

One of the boy´s, who had been unconscious outside the car in the middle of the road, said he heard the screams in the distance, but his body did not get up, he moved and had no control over him,he felt gone, like he vanished, losing himself, like it was not him, in that, he saw two roads, two (02) lights, like what they say about evil and good, Where he had to choose where to go, death or life, I hear a voice muttering that it was horrible, I'll take you with me! , and he wanted to move away, he said he saw in that, in one of the lights a woman dressed in a white suit who offered her hand


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but resisted, did not want to stop being on earth, because shaking that woman's hand meant she would no longer stay in the world, and heard the voices at the distance of one of her friends and then she returned to the body and opened her eyes.


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but still could not move due to the blow, for the departure of the car flying.
Of the seven (07) young people were three (03) who survived, the other four died, the woman died burned by the flames in the car, two (02) when they left the car flying, the impact was so much that they did not resist and the other young man died when the cars collided, due to a broken skull.

Everything happened so fast that nobody could help that girl, or the other young people immediately, because they were on a lonely road, but when some people started to return to their homes, they found this fatal surprise, and they started calling the ambulance and the relatives of the young people, although for some it was already too late.

When the young man who was in the presence of the light, reacted crying for what happened, already in the hospital, he asked his relatives for his cousin and they told him that he was in another room, "but his cousin was dead". ", since he was the co-pilot who was with him, in his car, and since everything happened while he was drunk, he would think that he was totally guilty of his death.

The mother of the young man who died due to skull fracture said that before her son left the house, she said: do not go back late or better not go, stay in the house, the poor lady said. I told him, but he did not listen to me, I had a bad feeling and look how my poor son ended, dead.

This young man was so close to death and chose the option, on his own, to resist and have the opportunity to stay alive, perhaps to serve as an experience for others, and thus value life.

It's a real-life experience, which happened in the Rincón Sucre, Venezuela, the young people who were left alive told what happened once they were better, it's worth mentioning that they went through a slow recovery process, as they were traumatized by what happened

This experience did not happen to me, but to my cousin, who was the young man who saw the woman who extended his hand, and struggled to return to his body. The wounds of the three teens that are alive were strong, and they were operated by fractures, but they ran with luck, keeping alive.

After that, car races in the village are avoided, if possible, unless they ingest excessive alcohol.

Being face to face with death makes you want to cling more to life, fight for everything, because you've been close to death.

I hope you become conscious by reading this story and be careful when consuming liquor.

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Thank you very much @cindycam for writing this story and submitting it to SWC. I sent a bid to a bot for your upvote.

Hello, thank you very much, for taking the time to read it. @gmichelbkk

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