Hi steemit-ers! Can I write that? Is it correct? :D

My name is Michele former e-commerce manager, startup and btc (mmm I have to say xbt?) lover. Like many of you I'm working hard all day to pay the bills, and I'm just bored about that, my life is going nowhere, I do nothing but just some money to continue to living (work) to make some money to continue to work to make some money to continue to work to continue to work to make some money.. Ok you now that.
Stop.
Is it time to end all of this?
I have a son, and I want for him a new life, a new world, a new society, for all of us.
Let's change everything!
Let's see what's next, and, sorry for my terrible english!