Your story didn't sound like a fairytale at all to me, You are good in writing but... I just like the part, you said you wanted to be a gladiator.. lol
It's would have been nice if you choose to be a mistress rather than!
Don't forget to follow @i-know so we can connect with each other maybe!.
What did you want to say, that life needs to be a fairytale to be good?
Not quite sure in which context you mean ''mistress''....
But thanks for the positive feedback on my writing tho...