i think an intro with greater detail may bring in better rewards ; not only the upvotes but the response as well ; youll need followers after all - i suggest looking around the intro posts and see what other people have been doing ; and maybe posting some pictures - spend some time on the content you put out ; learn about the written word and presentation for this platform - it will push you much further than short paragraphs .

Introduce people to the way your mind learns about these gadgets and tech products . bring something creative to the platform !
ive seen a few people quit because their rewards are not what they wish they were, and it is only because their posts are not attracting people to read and engage .

anyways - i thought i would just give you a penny for my thoughts ; how about you give me your two cents ?

^ and i say it that way because i dont like it said the other way -
a penny for your thoughts, and heres my two cents ; it automatically sends a negative message because not only does it dismiss your opinion, but it devalues it, and sets my own opinion valued twice as much ; when opinions are in no way matter of fact and should not be taken as truth .

but with that being said ;