While this is an introduction post ; i think it seems to lack information - personally i think you should try again - more information delivers more results and more rewards .
If i may -
You should talk about what games you like, and if you have a stream channel or a youtube, you should post your links so that you can find others on this platform that game as well .
You should also use a few extra tags so that other people in that tag know that you are introducing yourself .
And - once you get your phone up and running, check out the mobile app eSteem !

Try to post pictures and keep it very informative ; you can even try checking out other peoples introduction posts .
There are a few dedicated to video games already and i suggest checking there first !
But you should put in some information about yourself as well ; like what got you interested in video games, or what brought you to steemit !

And, if your using any pictures, or quotes from other places, make sure you post the source of your information !
Ive seen people get flagged for plagiarism ; so just a few friendly pieces of advice for the platform !
Hope you can follow me for more information !