Hello Steemians

my name is christian, a young boy from Nigeria as you all know form my previous posts.
As i always said in many of my post that am a graphic designer basically in Photoshop and turning human picture in a cartoon with Photoshop.

early this week i snap a picture and here is the picture

After snapping that i notice that the picture will be very good for cartooning
then i cartoon it then i have this

when i did that i feel on top of the world thinking i have done what nobody has done but no know there are so many mistakes.
when i get it online (that on Wednesday) people started making good comment on it but is was then i started get to know all the mistake i have made from that one.
after i have realize my mistake i wrote them out them did a new cartoon which i have this

so my dear steemians all i need right now is to know if this one is actually perfect
because all i could think was that is the best.

Happy Steeming and have a nice day