RE: Fiction Developmental Review Checklist
I focus my posts on travel and veganism but when I read your tips I see that I keep doing same mistakes all over. I agree with you that when you write something it does make sense to you. You don't write it to confuse the readers :) And it's always good to have someone read your words and provide you with the constructive feedback. This might be a painful process for both side.
I like how much detail you provided about the review process. Especially the part with 'Other' got my attention as there are many useful tips. When I think about my school days I'm sure that our teacher didn't go so deep into the texts written by kids. Otherwise the marks would be very different :)
Thank you for sharing such detailed analysis!