Ironically, considering the post's topic, the current Blog category questionnaire is entirely irrelevant to our #iamutopian posts, so I'm going to just review this one as a text.

This definitely seems like laying in the groundwork for further blogging on the topic of how to judge and evaluate data analysis. You go through the basics, look at definitions, and create the building blocks for further study. In that, I found the post quite valuable and enlightening, as I know nothing about data analysis.

I did have a couple of issues when it comes to grammar, style, and proofreading. So let's head to the examples.

• "as this may well include specific to task/organisation, give clues to how they do business, and provide details of information that they would rather not share to competitors, which could well include for reasons of privacy" is only part of a super long sentence that would have benefited from being broken up. "this may well include specific to task/organisation" is missing a word, I think? Maybe "details" after "include"? "provide details of information" seems to have a couple of redundant words. One of those is the "details" that missing earlier. "share to" should be "share with." Finally, "which could well include for reasons of privacy." What? Include what? Lemme try to edit this:
  "as this may well include details specific to task/organisation, give clues to how they do business, and provide information that they would rather not share with competitors. Another issue may well be privacy concerns."

• "Despite not finding anything on how a large corporation score analytical endeavors" is grammatically incorrect. It should either be "how large corporations score" or "how a large corporation scores."

• "gained on detailing" should be "gained from detailing."

More attention to details such as these would elevate this post from good to awesome. I hope to see that happen in the next posts in the series.

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