Cool story. Might want to join @f3nix Finish the Story contest every Wednesday. We're doing Sci-Fi based on the Italian hit role game Shantiara.

Also, in concern to narrators for short stories, you would probably have more success on ACX.com, an Amazon company. They have lots of talented narrators. You'll get many quality auditions. You make the choice. They get paid for finished hour. Might be around 5 SBD depending on the market and length of the story. Do a non-exclusive contract and post on DSound!

Let me know how selling the audio on Steemit goes . . .

Best. @cyemela