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RE: The Border (Finish The Story Entry)
the snapping proboscis of the damned.
I love the drama of this description so much :-)
Then it leads to one of the best descriptions of moving action I have read and a great pithy ending.
A firm hand slapped him on the back, knocking the wind out of him.
“Welcome to the border”
Really great entry @calluna.