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RE: It Awakens... (Finish The Story Contest Entry)
Very nice! Your ending is very complex, expecially for a non-native English speaker. The lexicon is refined and studied, the story is interesting and thoughtful 😀
Good luck for the contest!
She's always like this, I'm starting to learn. In fact, I kept her for last like the cherry on the tesseract.
<3 yey!
Thank you, I did go through a phase of worrying that my language may not be accessible to everyone on here, but I decided it was better to just go with the words that came to me in the first place. I am so glad that the complexity of the ending came across :D I am working on trying to convey things without specifically naming them. Thank you so much!!