idk where you get the military fiction from buts its good. I have no experience in the military, but your writing has a kind of authenticity to it.

I like the world you're creating. It's twisted and, apparently, full of weird monster shit that needs to get torched.

Your writing moves from scenes pretty quick and has the dialog to convey messages/plot, but as a reader, I have trouble visualizing who is speaking.

The next time you delve into this apocalyptic world, consider describing characters/scene in a way that helps the reader imagine the place. Give the dialog speakers. describe them. give us characters, descriptions, images. Delve deep!

Looking forward to whatever comes next.