My Short Script: Combat (Fight at The Bar)

Hello Everyone,

Fight inside the bar is a common site because that's where the people come to enjoy! Enjoying and fighting don't go each other well but when our Adrenaline is high nobody knows what our mind does 😂

Here in Sri Lanka most of people refer Alcohol as "Dancing oil" because our fun loving people always want to party when alcohol is around. However, in this story I want to relate same thing that I have experienced while in a bar, but with a storyline. Let's see whether you'll like it.

CHARACTERS
NameCharacter Description
RaveenA young man known for his common sense.
VeenaRaveen's best friend, a confident woman with fearless guts.
SaraA local thug who usually causes trouble in the bar.
VijeThe owner of the bar, a friendly man who dislikes violence.
DollyThe local singer, known for her melodious voice and charm.
ManjuAn active bartender who often ends up in unwanted situations.
PLOT

It is another usual night at the bar. Customers are dancing, enjoying drinks, and listening to Dolly's singing a local hit. Everyone is buzzing with energy clapping and supporting Dolly's song. Raveen and Veena sitting at a table in the corner, sipping their drinks and having a lively conversation when they notice that someone is shouting at the other corner in the bar.

A night at the bar, art by Midjourney

Sara
(angrily)

"Where is my order? How hard is it to get a simple drink around here?"

Manju saw the impatient customer and went straighter way to his table to clam him down, not knowing he is a local thug.

Manju
(apologetically)

"I'm sorry Sir. Your order will be ready soon. We're just a bit busy tonight."

Sara
(angrily)

"Oh.. now you want me to stay here without my drink until you get relaxed punk?"

Sara's got angry with the Manju's reply and wanted VIP service.

Sara
(angrily)

"Do you know who I'm you little shit"

Raveen
(to Veena)

"This isn't right. We can't let him treat that poor waiter like this."

Veena
(determined)

"You're right. Who is he to talk to a person like that"

Raveen and Veena approach Sara, standing up for Manju and defending his honor.

Raveen
(firmly)

"Hey, calm down man! That's enough. There's no need to make a scene. He is doing his best to serve everyone.

Sara
(snarling )

"Mind your own business! and get back to where you came from. This ain't your problem."

Veena
(firmly)

"Oh.. this is our problem, you are just ruining everyone's good time here and who the hell are you to speak to a person like that?"

Sara
(angrily)

"Now you want me to show who I am, come on I'll show you."

Sara tried to grab Veena's hand and Raveen pushed him furiously. Sara make some wild swing at them but they skillfully dodge and Veena kicked Sara's face with round kick that astonished everyone even the Sara himself couldn't believe he got beaten by a women.

Meanwhile, Vije, the bar owner, intervenes and shouted to calm the situation.

Vije
(booming voice)

"That's enough, all of you! No fighting in my bar! One more step and I'll call the police."

Veena
(definitely)

"This person mistreated you own employee. We can't let anyone to be mistreated like that."

The other customers intervene the scene with the agreement of what Raveen and Veena did. Sara knew that the situation getting worse and step backwards towards the exit.

Everyone clapped appreciating Raveen and Veena. Dolly Thank them with an announcement and started the song she was singing.

Dolly
(announcing)

We're all here to have a good time. Let's spread some love and leave the fights behind. Let's sing everybody..

MESSAGE

I often see in bars and restaurants that serving staffs get into very awkward situations because they are mistreated by their customers. These people only serve the customers and do not hold any management or decision making authority. I believe if we have any issue with our service we should take that to the management and not to these people.

Thank you.

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Peace to all 🙏

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The bars are propitious spaces for situations of this type, sadly, because liquor is involved. Bartenders, waiters and waitresses are exposed to these uncomfortable situations, it is a risky job but they deserve respect, because they are human beings and they earn their living serving others but not to be insulted or mistreated.

Exactly! they are just making a living out of it. As any other job they too have a respect from their customers.

Nowadays people are aspiring for jobs like management supervisor. There are too few people to do basic jobs like service. Hence, such problems keep growing more and more. Your script captures this point well

Yes everyone would gladly accept management role over a basic job. However, in this case it is more about seeing everyone equal regardless of the nature of their job.

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