@queenet
Indeed it is a great honour to meet with you in this great and wonderful platform.
To begin with your work , you try you best but you need to correct alot of things in your work such as making used of markdows styles,also talking about rice and bringing in other food items which you need to remove it and base only on you topic sentence instead of bringing in other food items which make the work not to look good
Also need to address the platform properly

Lastly make used of the right hashtags for your post to be visible to curators to help vote so as to increase your number of reputation.
Always make used of your markdowns styles which you didn't apply any of them

Make sure you remove these two Images for you work will be disqualified
Also you need to make Used of you Image source that is where you got your Images
For example

Imagessource
Looking at my Image below you will see it is written there Image source which will carry you to where I took that Image.