Creative writing: Dumped 2: by @clarence25

in Steem Cameroon3 years ago (edited)

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Tony: Hello beautiful ladies and the wretched being, I'm Tony but you can call me Pot of Money I am the younger brother to Dacosta. Do you mind me taking you ladies to a more fancy spot that befits your standards better than this slot your in?
without haste Joy stood up, picked up her bag and hug Tony saying let's go babe. But with rage Dave stood up and yelled;


Dave: Stop Joy!! But we are on a date already.
Joy: You call this a date Mr. Man? This is a waste of my time. Let's get going Tony boo.

Dave being so annoyed walked straight to Tony and gave him a hard punch as he felt his fingers breaking.
Unfortunately for him, the punch to Tony was like a grandma's touch on his cheek. However he retaliated with a knock out punch on Dave which did knock him out.
Together with joy he left to continue the date at Vegas.

Kate, Joy's friend stayed back to help Dave.
She took him to home, gave him medication and the spoke more about life and realized they had a lot in common.

4 days passed and joy decided to date Dave. She called him and told him she accepts to be his girlfriend, thanks to Kate. Dave was happy about the news for he knew he had finally won the battle despite the difficulties.


But all gorgeous joy had a plan. For she didn't just accept to date nerd Dave like that, it's because all her life she always dates the rich and unserious guys who always end up breaking up with her and chasing other women. So Dave to her, was like a compensation price. For if Tony breaks away, Dave wouldn't, either ways she won't be single.
Days got by and Valentine's day, was near. Dave told joy he had this little joint he wanted to take her out on that day. Joy whose friends have been telling about a nice joint they will love to take her to but she refused saying her rich Tony will take her to a more fancy place.

One lovely evening at swash lounge on the the 14 of February was valentine night.

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Joy all dressed up was picked up by Tony in his Jeep.
Right in front of swash lounge, Tony together with joy met his ex Sonia, a lady whom he loved so much. Without haste he left joy and chased after Sonia.
Joy was speechless and was about leaving when Dave called her from behind.


Dave : Hey babe finally you came.
Joy Of course I couldn't leave you hanging like that.
Dave : Come let's go in, the event is almost starting.
As Jane came in, she spotted her friends and was surprised that the fancy joint she wanted to go with Tony was the same slot her friends and Dave had invited her to.
While seated with Dave, she was busy with her phone laying curses on Tony for doing such to her.
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Later the owner of the lounge was to be announced so joy adjusted herself for who knows, she might get lucky to catch favour in his eyes as she knew her beauty was one that no mortal man could stand.
Unfortunately for her, the owner of the lounge was non other than Mr. Dave her nerd boyfriend.
She was shocked alongside her friends for no one saw this coming.
Without haste Dave took the opportunity to appreciate the woman who stood by him throughout the most terrible experience of his life for in her he found true love. He called Kate out and proposed to her, speechless as was, tears of joy running down her cheeks, for all she did was nod in confirmation.


Joy : what!!! What then becomes of me? How can you do this to me??
Dave : You brought this upon yourself. For you have just been dumped.

In tears she ran out as she couldn't handle the shame. Getting dumped by two men in one night, it's the most embarrassing thing for a slay queen.

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Both Dave and Kate lived happily ever after.

The End

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 3 years ago 

I enjoyed reading your beautiful story

 3 years ago 

Thanks man

 3 years ago 

Wow is it a true story @clarence25?

 3 years ago 

Nope sir it's all a figment of my imagination.
I just had the right pictures from friends. The characters are my friends tho

 3 years ago 

😂😂😂😂💔💔💔💔
Benga Russell don suffer for ya hand. And so Kate is Nina.. interesting
Your story line is good and the end was unexpected. Keep up. You might just end up being a script writer some day..

 3 years ago 

😅😅😅ooohhh thanks ooo na u dey next for ma list😅😅

 3 years ago 

No even try

 3 years ago 

😂😂😂😂😂weh Jane don suffer o

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