First Attempts.
Not even a strand of it looks nitty
as all seems to be gritty
and efforts appears gloomy
The first attempt
and frosting hearts
Its bulbous burden
enough to weigh a soul down
and cause a downpour of tears
The first attempt
comes with its own discouragement
But a heart that never gives up
will overcome its challenges
and become better
but regular practices
and more attempts
makes a success story
Thank you for your time.
My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.
Still me,
My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.
Olawalium; (Love's chemical content, in human form). Take a dose today: doctor's order.
Consistency is the key to success with in life. Discouragements will surely come but pressing hard would always yield good results.
Brilliant. You couldn't have said it better. Thanks a lot for this.
You are welcome !
As well as the first steps of a baby, the attempts in life should be like links, which will consequently fulfill the proposed objective if we do not lose heart.Congratulations.
Key word; if we do not lose heart. Thanks for this lovely comment. Thank you.
hahhahhahahhaha!...damn, @olawalium, hahhahahha luved ur word rhymes, for real..the first part, knocked me off, am like..whoa!!!!, bro..this is awesome, very inspiring and flows seamlessly
I am really humbled. Thanks for your lovely comment. It really means a lot.
Good say success stories come after a long struggle
Very true. Success is sweet after a hard fought victory.
Every first step is a trair fulled with a lot of courage. The more you dtay conversnt, the better you get more about the it.
Yes, a trial filled with a lot of courage. Courage is not the absence of fear but the presence of fear, yet the will goes on.
Thanks as always.
You write like the author of Queen primar.... Lol
very beautiful,bro
Hehehe whoever that is? Bless your heart, brother. Your words are always kind.
Glad you always appreciate it...
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