hello @marvinvelasquez What a moving story full of unexpected twists! The narrative envelops you from the beginning and takes you through Marta's emotions and her complicated relationship with her father. The reveal of the magic recipe at the end is clever and adds a special touch to the story. The moral is powerful and reminds us of the importance of empathy and patience, even in difficult situations. Excellent job building this story! I hope to read more of your stories in the future.