Weekly Contest, "Creating Short Story Week #31" || Story Name: Hide-And-Seek

in WORLD OF XPILAR2 years ago

Hide-And-Seek

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This creepy tale is suitable for children as young as five, as even our most immature like to be scared. You can also describe the creature in your wardrobe and then tell it to your child on a rainy afternoon. After that, you could suggest playing hide-and-seek.

Two sisters spent the summer at their grandparents' home. They had a lot of fun when the sun was shining. They enjoyed swimming in the lake, exploring the woods, and playing in the gardens.
It rained for one week towards the end of their stay. After playing board games, reading books, making crafts, and then getting bored, the girls were now exhausted.

The girls loved the idea of playing hide-and-seek at their grandparents' large house. The younger sister wanted to hide. While her more youthful sister covered her eyes, she ran to hide and counted fifty.

Her younger sister heard her older sister racing up the stairs and downstairs to the room behind her house. She was fifty years of age when she looked for her little sister.

The girl entered every room. She searched under the beds and in dark closets. Her sister was not visible behind the curtains or the doors.

Finally, she got to the room her grandparents told her not to enter.
She reached out for the doorknob and turned it slowly before pushing open the door. Surprised, she found the room almost empty.

I found only one item, an old, tall, carved wooden cabinet; I covered it. The door was slightly open.

The girl laughed and ran over, expecting to see her sister. But the cupboard was empty. As she leaned in, a cold, icy hand reached out from behind the closet and grabbed her wrist. She screamed and tried to escape, but the hand began to pull her back into the cupboard.

The girl's sister heard her screaming and ran to investigate. As her sister disappeared into the cupboard, she entered the room and watched in horror. The little sister was quick to react and ran towards the closet, grasping her sister's legs.

After a brief tug of war, she could pull her sister from the cupboard. The two girls ran out of the room, closing the door behind them.

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A #steemexclusive story by @ummehussain17

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 2 years ago 

Greetings @ummehussain17

The content is similar to the content of the source that I share below.

https://shridarcreepy.blogspot.com/2021/08/hide-and-seek-story-about-two-sisters.html

This is considered plagiarism, which is not appropriate in Steemit, I invite you to create original and good quality content, as well as to attend to the comments you have received in achievement 1.

@xpilar, @event-horizon, @steemcurator01

Thank you for the notification.

According to my findings, the person(@muhammadumartkd) who introduced this user to Steemit is not himself verified yet in the Newcomers' Community which explains why he's failed to follow the instructions.

 2 years ago 

@don-t

Thank you so much for your valuable feedback, showing through a vote.

I hope you enjoy my post,

A thoughtful message of appreciation

Please accept my deepest thanks.
Blessings,
@ummehussain17

Hi @ummehussain17,

Plagiarism is strictly not allowed on Steemit. You have to create unique content which comes from you only.

I am here to help you if you need any guidance. Just keep following the instructions and you will soon get the hang of this amazing platform.

 2 years ago (edited)

Thank you so much @event-horizon

Could you tell me which plagiarism tool you are using? I would like to take care not to copy the text next time.

Thank you for your support and guidelines

Blessings,
@ummehussain17

seotools, duplichecker, plagiarism.net .....

But the point is you shouldn't be needing these tools to rule out plagiarism if you try to write everything in your own words and according to your understanding.

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