Weekly Contest, "Creating Short Story Week #34" || Story Name: The Magic Comb

in WORLD OF XPILAR2 years ago

Greetings my dear friends of steemit,

This is a kind of fictional story and it has no relation with the real world. The purpose of this story is entertaining the story readers. It may also aware some people or bring consciousness among people. Its a story of a girl and how she was blessed with a magic comb. Let's me share the story for you.

Before starting the story would like to invite my friends to join the wonderful contest, You can find contest details here:
Contest Announcement By @adeljose

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Designed Via : canva

Story Name: The Magic Comb


There was a girl name Ava. Ava is only 20 but recently she found a gray hair over her head and beside that she was suffering from hair loss. She picked the single gray hair and five more gray hair grown over her head as a result she start looking 40 when she is only 20. Her friends make fun for her gray hair and also for her hair loss.

One day Ava was abused by her classmates and she was crying for this. Next day she went to the college by covering her head by wearing cap and scarf. She was looking pretty but the reality of her life make her disappointed everyday. She tried medicines, good food and hair dyes but all attempts failed. Ava's parents were worried about her marriage as she looks old with her gray thin hair.

All kind of treatment failed. One day Ava was returning from her college and she was walking alone. One old lady asked for water from her but she had no water bottle but Ava was kind so she bought a water bottle from nearest store. The old lady was really very pleased with Ava's kind nature.

The old lady also asked for food so she bring the old lady with her and fed her lunch. Ava's mother was not cooked extra food so Ava shared her own food with the old lady. Before leaving the Ava's house the old woman give her blessings that Almighty may solve her problems in life.

Next day Ava went to the market and bought a comb which was different than the other comb. It looks like made of gold but it was kept in the store like ordinary hair comb. Ava asked the price of this unique comb. The price of this comb was really very cheap and affordable for Ava but she thought the comb would be expensive one.

Ava loved the comb and when she comb her hair with this, she felt awesome and she noticed that there was no single hair in her comb, such a miracle in last 15 years as her hair fall problems appear when she was only five and she became bald headed many time at her early age, she is just 20 now. She noticed her hair loss stopped and new brownish hair is appearing. She was surprised and the comb was like working like a magic comb.

After a month Ava's hair loss problem and gray hair issues seems fixed. She named her golden color comb the magical comb. She went to the market and look for the shop where from she bought the comb. But she was surprise because the shop was invisible there and when she asked others where the shop shifted, other people replied the space is empty since the beginning and there was no store. Ava was shocked because she could remember the place where from she bought the magic comb and now the space is empty no shop is there, how it could be possible? Ava asked herself.

Ava recall some memories from the last month and she remember about the old lady who blessed her with the wish that Ava may overcome from problems in her life. And the blessing works for her. Now Ava no need to cover her head as her problem was solved with the magic comb. That old lady was a fairy who came to text Ava's kindness and rewarded her with the magic comb to solve her major problem in her life but Ava will never know that she was a fairy and Ava sacrifice her own lunch to fed the old lady who was a fairy. Ava pass the test of kindness and she was rewarded with the blessing magic comb.

Students whose abuse Ava felt sorry because they were cursed with the problem Ava had, they start looking old with their gray hair and they are having the same hair loss issues. So moral of the story is that, always be good and always do good to others and being good is a blessing itself.

The End

A #steemexclusive story by @shohana1

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Thanks For Reading!!

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 2 years ago 

Greetings friend @shohana1

Interesting story about a young woman who suffered from hair loss, but her good heart made a fairy guide her to a magic comb.

Thank you for her entry to the contest,

Participant #6

Thanks dear friend @adeljose for reading and accepting my entry for your contest. Stay blessed 💖

Hello @shohana1

A story that reminds me of the fables of the Brothers Grimm.

Hi friend @shohana1! Congratulations on your great story. In the end, Ava, thanks to her good heart, managed to solve the problem that made her life so bitter. This shows that in real life, those who are kind receive blessings in return.

Greetings and blessings!

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