A toda Velocidad!! (your writing story competition 114)

in WORLD OF XPILAR3 years ago

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Aurelio era un tímido muchacho de la ciudad a quien todo el día molestaban sus compañeros, al llegar a casa lo primero que hacía era encender su consola de videojuegos para escapar de la realidad, allí podría ser cualquiera, no importaba si le había ido mal en la escuela, o si sus padres discutían en el metaverso era Felíz.

Máximo era una persona implacable, no daba tregua a sus rivales, todo el tiempo que tenía disponible lo invertía ensu entrenamiento, sabía que para ser el mejor no podía hacer menos.

Cada día era una vacación para él, su deporte era su vida, y elpeligro no le importaba, entre las olas del Widsurf veía pasar su vida, y la competición su mejor momento. Los amigos y aduladores no se hacían esperar, en cada sitio que entraba era el tema de conversación, sus records, imbatibles, y cada torneo ganado solo hacía crecer su fama.

Se aproximaba el mayor campeonato de Windsurf y su entrenamiento era más duro de lo habitual, la tranquilidad del agua se interrumpía a su paso y los obstaculos se acercaban a mayor velocidad cada vez, pero siempre a ultimo momento y con una sonrisa en el rostro Máximo se libraba del escoyo con maniobras audaces y peligrosas!!

Su cuerpo y mente le estaban pasando factura a Máximo, no veía a su familia ni tampoco, dormía lo suficiente, pero eso lo compensaba con bebidas energéticas, y solo decía que una vez ganado elcampeonato podría descansar.

Llegado el día del torneo Máximo maniobró agresivamente para sacar la mayor ventaja del viento, obteniendo el liderato pero alcanzando velocidades peligrosas, cada vez el hermoso paisaje le pasanba de largo a una mayor velocidad, requiriedo un importante esfuerzo mental solo para saber donde estaban ubicados los obstaculos!!

Más rápido, mas rápido, más rápiso repetía una y otra vez en su cabeza mientras navegaba las cristalinas aguas, de pronto lo inesperado pasó y máximo se encontró de frente con un obstáculo.

En el Hospital todo era confusión, el paciente recien ingresado, estaba en estado crítico, su nombre Aurelio, quien se encontraba en su casa dentro de un entorno 3d jugando algún videojuego, que su madre no supo explicar, a cada persona, doctor o enfermera que se le acercaba a preguntarle algo solo podía responder "Más rápido, más rápido,más rápido"

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Aurelio was a shy boy from the city who was bothered by his classmates all day long, when he got home the first thing he did was turn on his video game console to escape from reality, he could be anyone, it didn't matter if he had done badly at school, or if his parents were arguing in the metaverse, he was happy.

Maximo was a relentless person, he gave no truce to his rivals, all the time he had available was invested in training, he knew that to be the best he could not do less.

Every day was a vacation for him, his sport was his life, and the danger did not matter to him, between the waves of the Widsurf he saw his life pass, and the competition his best moment. Friends and flatterers were not long in coming, in every place he entered was the topic of conversation, his records, unbeatable, and each tournament won only made his fame grow.

The biggest windsurfing championship was approaching and his training was harder than usual, the tranquility of the water was interrupted as he passed and the obstacles were approaching faster and faster, but always at the last moment and with a smile on his face, Maximo got out of the hatch with daring and dangerous maneuvers!

His body and mind were taking their toll on Maximo, he didn't see his family or sleep enough, but he made up for it with energy drinks, and only said that once he won the championship he would be able to rest.

When the day of the tournament arrived, Maximo maneuvered aggressively to take advantage of the wind, gaining the lead but reaching dangerous speeds, each time the beautiful scenery passed him by at a higher speed, requiring a significant mental effort just to know where the obstacles were!

Faster, faster, faster, faster he repeated over and over again in his head as he navigated the crystal clear waters, then suddenly the unexpected happened and he came face to face with an obstacle.

In the Hospital everything was confusion, the patient who had just been admitted was in critical condition, his name was Aurelio, who was at home in a 3D environment playing some video game that his mother could not explain, to each person, doctor or nurse who approached him to ask him something he could only answer "Faster, faster, faster".

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Participando en el concurso de escritura 114 de @xpilar

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Thanks for the great story @joseantpp
and I liked your ending to the story 😊

In the Hospital everything was confusion, the patient who had just been admitted was in critical condition, his name was Aurelio, who was at home in a 3D environment playing some video game that his mother could not explain, to each person, doctor or nurse who approached him to ask him something he could only answer "Faster, faster, faster".

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