Writing competition "133" based on my digital image. Now you are the author of "A place in wonderland" | Misfortune makes happiness

in WORLD OF XPILAR8 months ago

Hello Guys!!


Back again with me @grisaia-steem, this time I want to compete again in the contest organized by @xpilar. namely "Writing competition "133" based on my digital image. Now you are the author of "A place in wonderland" which maybe friends can take part too. I have included the link below. OK, let's start the story.

The story begins with a dry jackfruit leaf being blown by the wind. Flying high in the clear blue sky. The eagle, which was targeting a pigeon, hit a jackfruit leaf, causing it to change direction and fall right in front of a teenage boy who was sweeping his yard. The teenager was not wearing clothes, revealing his well-built body with muscles that looked well-trained, especially his stomach muscles, which showed the faint shape of his six-pax. Black cloth trousers that bloom with a burning flame motif add to the teenage boy's chivalrous impression.

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Now he has to go into the forest to look for supplies of dry wood that his mother will use for cooking. He wore a t-shirt with his chest open. When he wants to go and enter the forest, he always carries a medium-sized sword. Not too long but not like a dagger. This weapon was enough to help him defend himself when something unexpected happened. Usually, when other people enter the forest, they will be accompanied by their pets, such as dogs or tigers, perhaps?

When he started to get very far into the forest, he realized that someone was following him. When he looked back he saw a white girl radiant with a beautiful face that would make men fall in love with her. especially the teenage boy. The woman's name is Bela. Who is the most beautiful girl in their village. The teenager saw that Bela was alone, carrying a sickle and wearing straw sandals. This is surprising because usually he is always accompanied by his older brother.

"It's very rare for me to see you go alone into the forest like this, where is your brother? Why let you go alone into this forest?" asked the teenager.

"I was helping to dry the fruit that will be cooked tonight, but I saw you go into the forest, so I immediately took this sickle and asked permission from my family. I will go with you into the forest to look for firewood," replied Bela. while smiling at the teenager.

"It's no wonder he wants to travel with me because he is my fiancé. Maybe he was given permission by his family," muttered the teenager in his heart.

While they were chatting, they heard a woman screaming very loudly. The voice was shrill in the ears of the two teenagers. The teenager spontaneously grabbed Bela's hand and ran towards the source of the sound. Which is behind the bushes. When they arrived they saw a big tiger cornering the girl named Tasya. The teenager immediately let go of Bela's hand then ran away from Bela and Tasya and threw a branch at the tiger.

The tiger, who was disturbed by the teenager's actions, is now chasing the teenager who is running away from the tiger. Running with zigzag steps in order to distract the tiger, he unknowingly took the wrong step, causing him to slip into a ravine, followed by the tiger. He was grateful that even though he was injured, he saw that the tiger was dead because when he slipped into a ravine, the tiger fell onto a sharp branch, causing him to land impaled on the branch.

Now he is trapped under a large tree that surrounds him. Climbing the river may seem impossible. Because the ravine was too steep to climb. until he followed the cliff, hoping that there would be a cliff that he could climb to get back to the top. He felt stuck when he saw the cliff he was following leading him into a dark cave but it seemed like there was a thin glimmer of light behind the cave. It was as if behind the dark cave there was a place that was not covered by trees so that sunlight was unlimited in providing its rays.

Convincing his steps to continue to move forward into the cave. Walk slowly with his right hand pointing his sword forward while his left hand is injured. The longer you start to enter the cave, the more visible the light from behind the cave becomes. Now the warmth of the light can be felt by the body exposed to the light. When he was outside the cave he was just stunned by what he saw.

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A bright blue sky now greeted him. The greenery of the hills he saw. The gentle breeze that blew him. The expanse of blue lake water was no less beautiful than the color of the sky he was seeing right now. In the middle of the wide lake, you can also see an island standing firmly in the middle. Stand proudly with his height. The most striking thing he saw was the crescent moon which perfected the beauty of the moment. Now the pain he felt has paid off with this moment.

But how long can he last?

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 8 months ago 

Thanks for the great story

Thank you, nice to see your praise

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